Friday, 14 May 2010

The Moon

The moon is like a big ball of cheese,
The moon is a torch of light Guiding explores to the safe place they will Stay the night.
The moon is like two beady eyes gazing at us while we eat our pies.
The moon is like a beautiful mirror reflecting the shining sun.

By Sophie

3 comments:

  1. Some lovely similes and metaphors here Sophie. Well done. Be careful to check it through carefully before your final draft.
    Mr Forster

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