Friday, 14 May 2010

Amy's poem

My Stars.

Stars dancing in the dark just like fireflies,
They can never die,
They shine and shine forever more,
They keep me happy amused when I am bored,
These are stars they shine so bright,
They glow like fire,
They shine like ruby’s they fly and fly higher,
They twinkle, Twinkle star so bright,
Everyone is calm tonight.

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  1. Anonymous14 May 2010 at 02:56

    great poem

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  2. Anonymous16 May 2010 at 07:21

    Well done Amy. I really love the personification in this poem.
    In the 4th line I'm not sure if you meant to use both 'happy' and 'amused'--maybe have a look at this before you write your final draft. Also you don't need an apostrophe in "ruby's".
    Mr Forster

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