THE PLAYGROUND
Chit-chat chit-chat goes the girls on there phones
Stomp stomp goes the year 11’s chasing the New Year 7’s
Ching-chang goes the gate closing
Chuckle chuckle goes the bullies having a laugh
The evil playground is awake
The carrot from Peru
There once a carrot from Peru
All the while h hoped to have a shoe
So he went to Clarks
And went to some parks
That silly carrot from Peru
By Oscar Baldwin 7.3
Friday, 14 May 2010
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safe ozi from u know how lol love the carrot from peru
ReplyDeleteI love your onomatopoeia in 'The Playground' Oscar. Be careful to check your punctuation though (particularly your apostrophes).
ReplyDeleteMr Forster