Friday, 14 May 2010

Oscar's poems

THE PLAYGROUND


Chit-chat chit-chat goes the girls on there phones
Stomp stomp goes the year 11’s chasing the New Year 7’s
Ching-chang goes the gate closing
Chuckle chuckle goes the bullies having a laugh
The evil playground is awake





The carrot from Peru

There once a carrot from Peru
All the while h hoped to have a shoe


So he went to Clarks
And went to some parks

That silly carrot from Peru



By Oscar Baldwin 7.3

2 comments:

  1. safe ozi from u know how lol love the carrot from peru

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  2. I love your onomatopoeia in 'The Playground' Oscar. Be careful to check your punctuation though (particularly your apostrophes).
    Mr Forster

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