Friday, 14 May 2010

Chloe's Poem

The moon


The moon comes out at night,
The moon is my bedside light,
The moon shines in sky,
The moon is as round as a pie,
The moon is way up high,
And stays out until morning light,
The moon is a lump of cheese,
And as round as garden peas.

4 comments:

  1. :)Fantastic,Try and y
    use different sentance starts but otherwise very very gooooood ;)

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  2. I love this poem chloe :) it explains the moon in lots of different way :) from Katie x

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  3. love it chloe well done

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  4. Well done Chloe. Some great similes and metaphors.

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