Friday 14 May 2010

Chloe's Poem

The moon


The moon comes out at night,
The moon is my bedside light,
The moon shines in sky,
The moon is as round as a pie,
The moon is way up high,
And stays out until morning light,
The moon is a lump of cheese,
And as round as garden peas.

4 comments:

  1. :)Fantastic,Try and y
    use different sentance starts but otherwise very very gooooood ;)

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  2. I love this poem chloe :) it explains the moon in lots of different way :) from Katie x

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  3. love it chloe well done

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  4. Well done Chloe. Some great similes and metaphors.

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